Writing Craft Book Reviews & Nuggets


Every so often, I try to dive into writing craft books to learn and hone my skills. Here’s a few I read this year and the nuggets of wisdom I gleaned from them. If you’re looking for a star rating, I’ve decided against giving star ratings for craft books because, to be honest, I don’t enjoy reading them, but I do it for the learning opportunity. However, I did rank them from 1-7 here!

Story Genius (#2)

I actually bought this book several years ago, but just finished it today. I took a few solid nuggets away about character and motivation, however there’s a lot of how-to writing process detail in here that wasn’t quite what I was looking for.

However, if you’re a writer just starting out and looking for a breakdown of the story crafting process, this might be the right book for you!

Big Takeaway: The reader has to connect with the main character. If not, you’ve already lost them. (This book did bring an epiphany for me a few years ago, shifting my perspective from plot-driven to character-driven.)

Steering the Craft (#4)

I’m reading writing craft books this weekend, and as this one was recommended by quite a few internet strangers, I grabbed it from the library. This is definitely different from the other craft books I read in that it really is (and the author says this upfront) a workbook with exercises and examples like you would do in a workshop.

She even has recommendations for how many writers work best in working through the exercises in a peer writer’s group, how often to meet, etc. And not only does she have detailed exercises to drive home the different elements and tools of writing but examples from classic literature as well.

Overall, it was a quick, interesting read with a few insights that resonated with me, but I would most recommend this for those looking for exercises to work through in a peer writing group, especially when refining their writing at the line level.

Big Takeways: Write for you, be intentional with punctuation, listen for your rhythm, and beware the grammar bullies.

Bird by Bird (#6)

This is another one I started a long time ago, but only finished quite recently. This, I feel like is less a guideline on writing and more a philosophical take on it.

My Big Takeways: Write one step at a time, write for you, and if you something strikes you in an emotional way, write it down.

Story: Substance, Structure, Style, and the Principles of Screenwriting (#5)

This one is a little tough to review since I got the audiobook and I found the narration somewhat off-puting. I do like how this book approached story from a very broad level and then broke down the elements of story into extremely fine detail from beats to character to setting with examples from well-known movies.

Takeaway from this one: The best stories are multilayered and universal, and if every beat doesn’t serve the story, cut it.

Creating Short Fiction (#1)

A little dated in some respects, but I actually really liked some of the exercises here, especially when it comes to mining your experience to put things that really matter to you in your writing. The interplay between the unconscious and conscious mind was also interesting. Also, his thoughts on a “story-writing computer” were also amusing considering the present world we now live in.

Big Takeaway: As a microfiction writer, I also found his delineation between a sketch, an incident, an anecdote, and a story to be interesting. (The story involves emotional involvement and impediment.) And his thoughts on contrast also resonated. (That even grim stories must have viscerally light moments and vice versa)

Of the craft books I’ve read in the last two weeks, I think this is the one I would most recommend so far.

Writing the Blockbuster Novel (#7)

Of the six writing craft books I’ve read in the last few weeks, I think this one might be my least favorite. It mostly relies on the in-depth analysis of a few stories, and while I enjoyed the big points, overall I felt it was a bit of a dry read.

Big Takeaway: Blockbuster books rely on high stakes, powerful characters, dramatic scenes, intense excitement, “sexy” settings, 3-4+ point-of-view characters, intense emotional ties between the characters, and a radical premise.

Romancing the Beat: Story Structure for Romance Novels (#3)

This craft book was concise with a light sense of humor that made it super easy to read. While I don’t think this beat structure is universal for the romance genre, I do think it is a solid starting point, and there were some good insights here.

Takeaways: Romances are about two characters who each have some flawed misconception about love that is healed through a relationship journey that foundationally changes what they think about love. They most often progress in a 2 steps forward, one step back kind of dance and the dark moment will be related to their flawed romance-perspective.

As a writer, it’s important for me to read craft books so I can grow and learn… but I’m officially craft-booked out for 2024.

Thanks for reading!

Audiobook Review – Falling Short


A sweet coming of age centering on the friendship between two sixth grade boys (one sporty, one STEM-y.)

What I liked:
– Likable Characters
– Tough topics (alcoholism & divorce) tactfully addressed
– Sweet friendship
– No romance (I usually love romance books, but I think this story worked better for its audience without it)
– Important themes of accepting who you are
– Dual POVs from very different kids
– Tightly paced

What I didn’t like:
– Marco’s basketball growth over a week seemed a little fantastical to me
– It felt like the narrative was a little skewed to Isaac supporting Marco, and I would’ve like to see a little more of Marco supporting Isaac through his tough stuff.

Recommended for anyone looking for a sporty and sweet Middle Grade with solid themes and tough topics.

⭐⭐⭐½

Had a big MG-phase in my 2024 reading year. I don’t really know how it happened, but I definitely didn’t hate it.

Thanks for reading!

Writing Update – A Churn in the Dark (Into the Churn #2.5) has launched!


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We interrupt this book review blog for a book release update! A Churn in the Dark (Into the Churn #2.5) launched today and the blurb is below!

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Love and murder stir between the stars.

Four months after the Belethea Race Royale team’s narrow escape from Otho and Casolla’s dark syndicates, Sylvia Long, Grady/Guns, and Belethea’s newest doubles team arrive on Crion for its inaugural New Year Race. But with Sterling/Hart enjoying their own holiday back home, Sylvia struggles to balance her ever-growing duties as both team coach and manager.

Meanwhile, Agent Shiro Tanaka—Sylvia’s boyfriend and the Belethea royalers’ one-man security team—is determined to use this working holiday to propose to Sylvia under Crion’s aurora-bathed skies. But when the race takes a dark turn, all their plans go out the airlock as Shiro and Sylvia rush to save their royalers.

The bad blood is still thick in Casolla, and someone isn’t about to let Belethea forget it.

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Ebooks of this novella are available on Amazon and Whimsical Publishing’s website! If you want to check out the A Churn in the Dark vibes on Spotify, you can find the playlist here. And you can also add it to your Goodreads, here.

Also, the cover reveal for Into the Abyss (Into the Churn #3), the last book in the trilogy, is scheduled for December 3rd and will release in March, so keep an eye out!

As always, thank you so much for reading and all of your support—your recommendations, ratings, and reviews give these books wings! (And if you’d like to receive updates like this to your email, you can sign up for my author newsletter here!)

Audiobook Review – Just for the Summer


What I liked:
– Justin
– The side-characters
– The curse premise

What I didn’t like:
– Emma

While I’ve read all of Jimenez’s books, I’m more of a “The Friend Zone” trilogy fan then “Part of Your World.” In general, I’ve like the banter and the characters, but I feel like in each of the Part of Your World books, we’re focusing on the trauma of the FMC, and I feel like the MMC’s arc gets a little shorted as he pines for her and waits for her to heal. In general, they’ve just been a little too heavy for me. But if you’re looking for a romance with deeper themes on trauma, familial relationships, and recovery, this is the book for you!

⭐⭐⭐⭐

Do you ever wish you liked a book more than you did? I’ve got those feels.

Thanks for reading!

Audiobook Review – Dungeon Crawler Carl Books 1-6


Well, since this series has pretty much been the highlight of my year, I’ve gathered all the reviews of books so far. Please know, I almost never get into series, especially one this long, AND I bought an audible subscription literally just for these audiobooks. So this is a pretty big deal for me. I’ve also gotten my dad, husband, and BFF into this series, and now my husband and I are (im)patiently waiting for book 7 to come out. (Ebook in November and Audiobook in January.) Seriously, it speaks volumes that I even know that. However, let’s just state up front that if you have pearls to clutch, this series isn’t for you. But enough chitty chatty. Without further ado, the actual reviews:

Dungeon Crawler Carl (#1): 5⭐

Okay Carl & Donut. You got me. This was incredibly entertaining.

What did I like:
Everything.

Recommended for anyone looking for a hilarious, action-packed time. This was my first LitRPG, and though I’m not a huge gamer anymore, I did play a few MMOs in my time, and I do have a general knowledge of dungeons, stats, buffs, etc. If you don’t I’m not exactly sure what your experience will be, but I didn’t think it was critical to appreciating the plot, characters, and banter.

And the fact that the audiobook is narrated by Jeff Hays (a Patrick-Warburton-sound-alike, read: Krunk) – perfection. I mean I basically feel like this is Krunk went on the Hunger Games with his diva pet cat. I got this audiobook from the library, but they didn’t have the sequels, so I literally got an audible subscription for the rest of the series.

This was an instant cure for my reading slump this year, and I already recommended to my Dad, my husband, and my coworker. So yeah. Definitely give this one a look and you can thank me later.

(Note: *Not* recommended if you have sensitivities to swearing, gore, or dark humor.)

Carl’s Doomsday Scenario (#2): 5⭐

Fantastic sequel that lives up to the first book in every way. I could not buy book 3 fast enough.

The Dungeon Anarchist’s Cookbook (#3): 4.5⭐

This one felt just a little on the long side, with one too many technical battles. But I still really enjoyed the character growth, and some plot developments that really surprised me. Totally enjoyed and absolutely in for book 4! 

The Gate of the Feral Gods (#4): 4.5⭐

Another fantastic entry in the Dungeon Crawler series. I did feel like this one (similar to book 3) was a little longer than necessary with lots of intricate detail on smaller skirmishes and quests. But as always, I really enjoyed the plot and character development in this book, and I’m excited to read book 5. I honestly can’t remember the last time a series held my attention through book 5, and I’m super impressed with all the threads of this plot line. I’ve recommended this series to like 4 of my friends, and I’m super curious to see if the momentum can hold through 3+ more books!

The Butcher’s Masquerade (#5): 3.5⭐

This one dragged a bit for me. While it still employed a lot of the shenanigans that made the first four books great, here they started to feel repetitive, and I felt like this one lacked the twists and the character growth that really kept me turning pages earlier in the series. And, at 726 pages… it feels incredibly long. There was a lot of “this is the plan” and “but this is how the plan went,” and I didn’t feel as invested in the sideplots.

Which is all to say, I think I’ll be taking a break from Dungeon Crawler for a little while. Maybe I’ll pick up book 6 down the line, but for now, I think I need something different.

(note: the break only turned out to be about 3 audiobooks long before I couldn’t resist diving back in)

The Eye of the Bedlam Bride (#6): 5⭐

Dayuummm. Not going to lie, in book 6, I was worried I was getting tired of this series, but this one totally amped up the stakes. The new battle play was interesting, and the tension and pacing were tight through the end. My husband and I are both counting down the days until book 7!

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Oh my. Are those… 5 glowing stars?!!? Why yes they are. Seriously cannot say enough good things.

Also, Google search, if this picture shows up as my author photo, we’re going to have words.

Thanks for reading!

Audiobook Review – The Fake Mate


I saw this floating on bookstagram and was looking for something light, fun, and different to get me out of epic bookslump of 2024. And even though this isn’t my typical read (I think this is my first alpha/omega book), it fit the bill in many ways.

What I liked:
Dual-POV romance
Fake Dating
Likable Characters
Fast read
Rom-Com feel

What I didn’t like:
Dirty talk always feels awkward to me
The spice:plot ratio was more skewed to spice than I prefer
Fated mates isn’t my favorite trope
The 3rd act break-up felt a little forced

But like I said, this was a light, fun read, and I would recommend for anyone looking for a spicy shifter rom-com.

⭐⭐⭐⭐

Yep, we went there. Strangely, not as awkward as I was expecting, but not really my cup of tea either.

Thanks for reading!

Audiobook Review – Finally Seen


I honestly didn’t think Middle Grade would be the solution to awful reading slump this year, but here we are with the second awesome MG read in a row!

The characters’ struggles, emotions, and heart really popped off the page, and I was so invested Lina’s journey as she learns to find her voice and to navigate a new country and her family dynamics. The voice really pops off the page, and the importance of the themes and topics really hits home. The audiobook narration was also fabulous, and I definitely recommend for readers of all ages. I enjoyed it so much, I immediately snagged Front Desk by Kelly Yang too and can’t wait to dive in!

Extra note: Unfortunately, Front Desk didn’t grab me, and I didn’t continue after the first chapter.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Middle-grade reading-slump-busters for the win this year.

Thanks for reading!

Audiobook Review – Swordheart


So I really enjoyed A Wizard’s Guide to Defensive Baking, but this one totally solidified me as a T. Kingfisher fan.

What I liked:
-The characters’ voices are super strong and they pop right off the page
-Unique, awesome worldbuilding
-Quirky lovable characters
-Slowburn romance
-Writing that grabbed me straight from the first page
-Amazing narration

What I didn’t like:
-At about the 80% mark, a character made a choice that I thought wasn’t in line with their character for the sake of the plot – definitely a super frustrating moment.
-The pacing in the last 25% felt like it dragged to me.

Overall though, I highly recommend this to anyone looking for quirky fantasy with a side of romance, and I’ll definitely be reading more from Kingfisher!

⭐⭐⭐⭐¾

I’m still thinking about this one a couple months later. The voice and characters completely sucked me in!

Thanks for reading!

Book Review – The Maiden Ship Trilogy


Since I read books 2 and 3 and finished this trilogy this year, I’d figured I’d post all the reviews together!

The Maiden Ship

Magic on the high seas – definitely enjoyed this heartwarming, magical adventure on the sea with its huge found family vibes, colorful cast, a sweet slow-burn romance, and old lore. Will definitely be reading book 2!

The Lion of the Sea

A high seas adventure with magic and sweet romance – loved how the world expanded and the relationship developed in this sequel. Definitely recommend for fans of the book one.

The Rightful Bearer

An epic conclusion to a fantastical trilogy! Loved this epically satisfying conclusion to the Maiden Ship trilogy! Anyone looking for pirates, magic, romance, and a huge side of found family, this one’s for you!

Overall, I would describe this series as a fantastical but cozy nautical adventure with a side of romance and a classical feel.

⭐⭐⭐⭐

Hi, yes, hello, I’m ready for my magical high-seas adventure, please.

Thanks for reading!

Audiobook Review – Out on a Limb


Aw this was such a cute (surprise pregnancy) romance, and I loved the audiobook narration.

What I liked:
– The characters- both Win & Bo were super likable, I enjoyed the development, and the side characters really popped off the page too
– Lots of light banter
– Just in general, a cozy, feel-good romance
– The disability rep (I especially appreciated the author’s forward)

What I disliked
– I felt like the tension in the last third of the book flagged a little bit and in general, this book felt a little longer than it needed to be.

Overall, if you’re looking for what I would classify as a cozy pregnancy romance with spicy bits, I highly recommend this one (especially the audiobook!)

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Thanks for reading!