I got this audiobook NetGalley widget in my email and decided to give it a shot on a bit of a whim. Sally Hepworth is a new-to-me author but I was feeling in the mood for a bit of a mystery or a thriller. Full disclosure, I’ve been in a bit of a reading slump and the narration wasn’t my favorite, but this story held my attention from beginning to end. I wouldn’t say it was particularly fast-paced, and I don’t think I would classify it as my usual read, but the *characters* absolutely hooked me.
The characters are all deeply flawed, and yet somehow I still loved them all. The incredible bond between the three main characters and the history between them had me rooting for them the entire time. The side characters popped, and I even found the villain to be riveting in her slow-burn, sadistic kind of way. While I think this was on the slower side for a thriller (I would call it more of a mystery) the reveals were perfectly paced to keep my attention fully in the world and made me look forward to my commute.
And despite the darkness of this novel (definitely check the content warnings), I loved the hopeful ending that was just incredibly satisfying. Definitely recommended for anyone looking for a solid character-driven mystery!
Since I flew through this series, I combined the reviews for five books currently out into one post.
Book One
So… I saw the Netflix show when it first came out and loved it. Finally got around to reading the graphic novel, and my god, how is it EVEN BETTER THAN THE SHOW?! (I mean, really, I should’ve expected this, the book is almost always better than the show/movie, but the show set such a high bar!)
Sweet, YA romance perfection I would recommend to literally everyone. My only warning is there’s totally a cliffhanger (thank goodness I have seen the show for that reason,) and I cannot WAIT to read the rest of the series. (5 stars)
Book Two
Just as adorable as book one and I’m honestly blown away by how faithful an adaption the Netflix show is! Onward to book 3! (5 stars)
Book Three
Cutest series ever continues to be the cutest series ever. I can’t believe I didn’t read these sooner! (5 stars)
Book Four
Another cute installment of the Heartstopper series! I really appreciate how they took on mental health issues in this one, and there were some really sweet moments, but I felt like the majority of this volume was told through journal entries in a narrative flashback style instead of experiencing the events in the moment with the characters. I’m not a huge flashback fan, so I didn’t love this one quite as much as the first three. Overall though, definitely recommend for fans of the series, and I’m definitely excited to read vol 5! (4 stars)
Book Five
Another cute installment of the Heartstopper series that tackles hurdles (in per the usual, an amazingly sweet and tactful manner) like applying to college, long distance, and physical intimacy. I read this in one sitting and definitely recommend for all Heartstopper fans. Can’t wait to see what volume six brings, and hoping for more seasons of the show as well!
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Oh my gosh, after that INTENSE reading slump, these books were such a relieving breath of fresh air. My only complaint is that I want more!
Since these audiobook books were bundled together (along with book 3), I’ve combined the reviews into one post.
Book One’s Review:
This was a cozy mystery with all your usual flavors of paranormal in a magical library.
What I liked: – The premise. I mean, who wouldn’t love to find out you’re a witch and go live in a magical library? – Easy read, very short, and super chill vibes.
What I didn’t like: – The tension and character depth just weren’t there for me. Though they’re dealing with a murder, everyone seems to take it rather in stride, and I didn’t feel like we really cracked the surface of most of the characters.
So no quite for me, however, if you like your mysteries with MAXIMUM cozy, this might be for you!
Book Two’s Review:
I read this one because the first three audiobooks were bundled together. I could probably copy and paste my review for the first book for this one. Super cozy mystery. Quick easy read. But not quite enough tension or character development for me. However, book 1 and book 2 are so consistent in formula and tone, I definitely think if you enjoyed the first book, you would enjoy the second. As for me, I think I’m going to stop myself here since these aren’t super up my alley.
⭐⭐⭐¼
Me trying to figure out what genre is going to get me out of this reading slump.
I have big mixed feelings on this one. Regency romance isn’t really my thing generally, but I found a “most popular series” list and I’d tried nearly all of them, so my completionist self is now exploring the last few I missed.
I really liked the comedic sense of the gossip papers and the light-hearted writing style. But honestly there’s two big plot points (see spoilers below) that were (and I don’t use this word lightly) problematic and definitely not romantic.
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I mean the brothers forcing Simon to marry Daphne at gunpoint, and Daphne herself manipulating him just felt so… ugh. And then… Daphne makes it her mission to *change* Simon even after he’s very explicit with her about what he does and does not want. When he doesn’t bend, she forces herself on him while he’s drunk and asleep. O_O
If not for those things, I think I could’ve enjoyed this or might read the sequels one day, but those two big elements just left my skin crawling. So… yeah. Not for me. But if you’re a regency romance fan or a fan of the Netflix seris, it could be for you!
⭐⭐⭐
I mean, at this point, the slump is really my fault for choosing books based on a “most popular” list. But I want to be informed!
So this a dark, witchy tale with a dual-POV romance where sides are unclear in a mix of gray. I feel like this should’ve been straight up my alley, but for some reason, it really just didn’t grab me, and the religious hypocrisy and misogyny themes were a little thick for my taste. Around the 60% mark, I started rooting for the characters, and there some nice reveals between 60%-80%, but overall I think the pacing was a little slow for me and I thought the relationship and plot just didn’t quite develop as naturally as I would’ve liked. The narration on the audiobook is great though, and this one’s extremely popular so if you’re looking for a dark fantasy with marriage of convenience / forced proximity / enemies to lovers tropes, this might be for you!
⭐⭐⭐¼
At this point, I was literally starting to worry my book radar was broken. The ready slump growsss. 😭
So I loved book 1 of this series, I thought book 2 was okay, and I think I feel about the same about book 3. Though I really like the quick-flowing writing style, over the course of the series, I feel like we just kept adding characters to the Scooby Doo crew and in this one they all kind of blended together. The only one that popped for me is Nate, and while I enjoyed getting more of his story, I felt like the climax felt a just little flat. However if you enjoyed book 2, I’d definitely recommend giving this a try!
I knew it would be hard to follow up the first book after I loved it so much, but this wasn’t the sequel I hoped for.
I felt like in so many ways, we were re-treading the ground covered in book one, and I didn’t see as much magical world-building as in the first book. While the writing was wonderful and I still loved the characters, I feel like we didn’t dive deep enough into them in this book. I think all of those elements combined really slowed the pace down. And yet the ending felt weirdly rushed?
Overall, this left me with mixed feelings about this duology, but of course, if you loved the first one, I’d still recommend picking this one up and seeing what you think. (And the audiobook narration is fantastic!)
⭐⭐⭐¾
Sequels are hard, man! (Did I mention I was in a reading slump? x_X)
What I liked: Wes. I totally wished this had been a dual POV! Wes is so obviously head over heels with Liz from the beginning, but he does what he can to help her get what she wants. And he had so many clutch saves when she was in a bind.
What I didn’t like: Liz. The clueless heroine is one of my least favorite tropes and I got pretty impatient with her. She goes through a big lying phase, treats her best friend poorly, does the whole “makeover for a guy” thing, gives the “it’s complicated” excuse for not communicating, and doesn’t treat Wes very well.
Neutral: This book was chock FULL of pop culture, movie, and song references. I don’t really have any strong feelings about them, but I know some do so I’m throwing it in here.
I don’t think this one was really for me, but if you’re interested in a classic-feeling YA romance, it might be for you!
⭐⭐⭐¼
At 3 “not-for-me” books in a row, I think I can’t deny that I’ve entered into the dreaded reading slump.
Okay, so obviously, this is going to vary greatly depending on the author. Processes and writing speeds vary tremendously from person to person and actually my own process and writing speed has evolved a ton since I first started. Mostly, I just wanted to post this because I get a lot of people who become very confused when I write a book and then it pops into a black hole before getting published (insert non-zero number here) months or years later.
So I made this chart of all the books I’ve written to date, when I wrote them, and their published date or status (if they are still unpublished.)
My first book, Odriel’s Heirs, too the longest by far with 8 years between finishing the first draft (which took three months) and publishing it. But for 5 of those years, I never thought I would take it beyond that first draft. Then it took me a lot of time to figure out how to revise effectively, write consistently around all the other life demands, and stumble through the querying learning curve.
My second book, The Gatekeeper of Pericael, with three years from draft to publishing, also had a long wait for a lot of the same reasons.
Then, I actually started to figure out what I was doing! Once I had a go-to writing process, everything became so much smoother. And since I didn’t query any of the Odriel’s Heirs sequels, I was able to churn those out fairly quickly (especially the novellas.)
However, the querying process was still slowing everything down. I queried the Whimsical TBA title for two years😱 (of which, I had full requests out that entire time) before it was acquired. And once the Into the Churn series had a home with Whimsical, it sped the process up again for those sequels because I no longer had to query for an indeterminate amount of time.
Then I signed with my wonderful agent, Kristen Terrette, in 2023, and everything changed for me again! Now I have entered an entirely new era: On Submission. Which, much like querying, is an indeterminate amount of time in which the literary agent pitches the manuscript to editors. And even when/if it’s picked up by a publisher, the amount of time between getting acquired and being published could be over a year!
So—when will Inky & Heater, Ninth Circle, and Midnight Falls be published? At this point, the earliest I could imagine would be 2025, and it could very well be beyond. But I still have a super exciting line-up with ITC #2.5 coming in December, ITC #3 in March, and the Whimsical TBA title coming in September 2025.
For everything else, I’ll just keep my fingers crossed for as soon as possible!
If you have any fairy dust to sprinkle on my inbox, I’ll take it!
So beta readers are a *huge* part of my revision process. I usually have around 8-10 beta readers review and critique my manuscript before I send it to my agent or publisher, and they make it *so* much better. However… feedback, critiques, and suggestions on your beloved book baby aren’t always easy to absorb. In fact, the first time I got feedback from a developmental editor on my first book, I was so discouraged, I had to put down the manuscript for three months before picking it up again. But you know, that feedback made my book *so* much better, it made me grow as a writer, and I’m incredibly grateful for it. So, I put together some tips that have helped me to work through feedback efficiently, effectively… and with minimal emotional damage.
Skip to the bottom. This may sound weird, but it’s easy to get lost in the weeds when you’re looking through line feedback. If you skip to the bottom, you’ll get a feel for what the reader thought of your book as a whole, which will help you put their feedback in perspective.
Condense their feedback. Pages and pages of feedback can be super overwhelming and scary! It looks a lot easier to handle if you condense it into a bullet list of problem points.
Reword their problem points in your own words. This helps take the emotion out of it so you can just focus on the content. (A lot of times this also helps to condense the feedback.
Change the comments into actions that you can check off. (Note: if they suggested a fix, you *do not* have to use the fix they suggested if it doesn’t feel right.) Like perhaps if they said “Chapter three drags on and on, you should just cut it.” Maybe you would write, instead: “Add tension between characters A & B in chapter three and trim dinner scene” or something. Make it as specific as possible.
If you feel overwhelmed at any point in the process, let it sit! Sometimes distance helps us process while the problem points simmer on the backburner. I always feel better coming back to feedback after letting it percolate for a while, and it’s easier to read them without emotion the second time.
And if the suggestion/problem point just absolutely doesn’t feel right to you, delete it! If I followed every single suggestion of every beta reader I have on a manuscript, it would quite literally ruin the book. Sometimes beta readers miss things, and they often have differing opinions. When you make a change, make sure it aligns with your gut!
And since beta readers *do* often have differing opinions, I recommend you have at least 2-3. (Three works great as a tie-breaker for contrary opinions.) But *please* make sure they each have their own document to work off of. If they influence each other, it’s tough to get each of their true, unswayed opinions.
I also recommend that once you read it, you don’t let them read it twice. Often, when beta readers point out a problem, they often have a solution in mind. And it may not be *your* solution. If you’re still unsure about a problem point, I highly recommend getting a fresh beta coming in with no preconceived notions.
And remember, if one beta reader says it, it’s an opinion. If two beta readers say it, it’s a problem.
If a beta reader finishes your story and has *no* feedback other than something like “I liked it,” or *only* gives you positive feedback, that’s a great morale boost… but not super helpful for making a story better. If a beta reader cannot give constructive criticism or feedback that you feel in your bones, I would find another one. If a beta reader is unsure how to give general feedback, I would point them to this awesome questionnaire by Stacy Claflin. I use it myself to summarize feedback when I’m beta ready.
Where to find beta readers
This is a question I get *all* the time. I have found beta readers all over the place. You have basically two options here. You can use professional beta readers or you can swap with another writer (where they beta read your manuscript and you beta read theirs). My general suggestion is if you’re strapped for cash, you swap. If you’re strapped for time, you pay.
I have found Fiverr to be an amazing source of professional beta readers, many with specialties in different genres. I’ve used @maddy216’s beta reading service on my last like seven manuscripts. As of this writing, her service is $35 for up to 125k words, and her feedback is honest and solid.
I also consistently use MK Editing‘s beta reading service. As of this writing, they offer a $25 standard beta read, and a $75 in-depth beta. I’ve used both depending on the book.
Update, 11 Jul 2025: No longer recommended due to undisclosed use of Gen AI.
If you’re looking to swap beta reads, the hashtags: #writingcommunity, #betareader, #cpmatch, or #critiquepartner on X/Twitter, Instagram, or Threads can be a good place to start. There are beta reader groups/forums on Goodreads where you can post your pitch, and critiquematch.com makes it very straightforward to find a good match.
For me, I use a mix of swaps and professional beta readers. While I’m most often strapped for time, there’s also a huge benefit in *being* a beta reader. It’s a great way to make lasting friends and connections in the writing commmunity, I always learn something new from each and every critique partner, and critiquing also helps me to think critically about my own work.
Anyways, hopefully these tips were helpful, and I wish you all the luck in your revisions. If you have any questions or blog topic requests, feel free to shout them out in the comments!
Happy revising! (Yes, I’m writing this as I walk on the treadmill, because multi-tasking.)